Revising

I think revising is very important, because nobody's bets work comes out in the 1st draft. When you have other people read your work and get feedback on it, you can jsut build from it and make it even better. Its good to have a fresh set of eyes read your work, because they might see something that you don't. So with all the stuff i have gotten revised in class, i will have a positive outlook on it and make it better.

5 Stories

I love telling stories, I am known to be a great story teller, and with all my experinces I have some ptreey funny and intresting stories. Never a dull moment with me
1. Giving CPR to a baby at work
2. Being locked up in AC
3. Getting out of a ticket at 5am in the morn while doing 100 mph
4. Throwing asurpirse party for my friend
5. getting into my car accident.

Walt Whitman

Last semester i had a class about the history of NYC and we read a lot about Walt Whitman. I really enjoyed him, he wrote a lot about the City and how people were and how they lived. He wrote from simple things as the Brooklyn Bridge and just taking the Staten USland Ferry. I loved how he could take such a simple subject and make it so moving. here is a link of some of his stuff.
http://whitmanarchive.org/